diff --git a/templates/shutdown.html b/templates/shutdown.html
index b5163aa..0ffa86e 100644
--- a/templates/shutdown.html
+++ b/templates/shutdown.html
@@ -10,32 +10,34 @@
- Burgernotes Discontinuation FAQ
- On November 12, 2023, Burgernotes will shut down.
+ Burgernotes Discontinuation FAQ
+ After 4 months, on November 12, 2023, Burgernotes will shut down.
- How will this affect me?
+ You might be asking, how will this affect me?
- You'll no longer be able to access Burgernotes, and all of your notes.
- You may download your notes before November 12, 2023.
- - Your data will be deleted after November 12, 2023.
+ - Your data will be permanently deleted after November 12, 2023.
- Third-party instances will be unaffected, but will likely no longer be maintained.
- - As of November 3, 2023, you may no longer create a new burgernotes account.
+ - As of November 3, 2023, you may no longer create a new Burgernotes account.
- If you still want to use Burgernotes after the discontinuation date, use the Hectabit.org instance, by Tracker-Friendly.
- Downloading your notes
+ Downloading your notes
+ You may download your notes until November 12th. To do this:
- Open Burgernotes
- Open the settings menu
- Press "export notes"
Your notes will be saved to a JSON file.
- Alternatives
+ Alternatives
+ Like Burgernotes - all the alternatives listed below are free software
- - Standard Notes
- - Joplin
+ - Standard Notes - very similar to Burgernotes
+ - Joplin - A pretty powerful note taking app
- Special thanks
- Special thanks to these amazing people:
+ Special thanks
+ Special thanks to all of these amazing people that made Burgernotes possible: